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Just One more

Just a cut.
Just a scratch.


"What's that mark.?"
"It was the cat."

Just an excuse.
Just another lie.


"What's with all the bracelets.?"
"Just fashion, why.?"

Just a tear.
Just a scream.


"Why were you crying.?"
"Just a bad dream."

-But it's not just a cut, or a tear, or a lie. It's always 'just one more' until you die
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:iconpertinaciously:
pertinaciously Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015
what is going on why did u write this omg
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YoiHinamori Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs tightly*
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AmyRose459 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Artist
Oh...My...Gosh! I love it! So deep and well written!
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Bella-Swan-Fan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my God ;-; *sniff* I always kinda thought Julchen would be a cutter...just the history of Prussia. I think gil would be the same. not to mention this makes me think of myself as well.
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*cries* so sad
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FilippasAngelMartina Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That.. That was so amazing.. Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
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:icontheblazerwolf:
TheBlazerWolf Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful! reminds me of me xD
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:iconveiledelegance:
VeiledElegance Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
Beautifully written <3 
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:iconkaaslave:
kaaslave Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
I'm not getting what the poem's about...is it child/spouse abuse, is it about drug addiction, what? :confused:
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:iconheavenxcookie:
Heavenxcookie Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   General Artist
It's about cutting yourself.
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:iconkaaslave:
kaaslave Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Okay, then.
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:iconelitzia:
Elitzia Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this.
Even though I never said it was the cat, or hid it with bracelets.
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SamsSkittles Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist
That's so sad!! :tears: I love it tho!! :heart:
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:iconromanianwolf:
RomanianWolf Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Deep stuff here
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:iconyureisan:
yureisan Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Moving!
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RainbowSofie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's deep
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Syber666 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is true.. I do say it was the cat ._.  And I have bracelets to hide it too... But I need more :/

This is amazing and beautifully written :heart:
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JavilinYamato Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I've been there....I have many scars on my arm that'll never go away to remind me of a time I was in a dark place. but at the same time those very cuts we make on our bodies teach us something. time heals wounds and that they may hurt, the pain may last but it won't last forever,

I prefer to call them Labels. because each one of them has a story. someone who hurt me, someone who broke my heart, or my form of punishment for something I did. self harm is wrong but people also have to understand that when someone is in that kind of situation, there is no wrong in their mind cause all they feel is despair and disgust and the world around them. we lose rationality, we lose the things that makes us human.

it takes humility, compassion, trust....it takes a lot to break the cycle and more so to stay out of it. but most of us...we can't do it alone because being alone in our time of need is what got us into that place. I made lots of excuses and lies to cover it up before I came clean because I myself felt (which was true for the most part) that no one cared, and feeling like that only sinks you further into the hole.

so for any of you who knows someone like that...don't turn a blind eye. be a friend. because just like the poem ended, next time It might not be another cut, it'll be their throat.

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Scourgewolf Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconfeelplz: Feels time.
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:icondogviolet:
Dogviolet Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Beautifully written; lovely casual rhyme. :)
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:icondukeofdebauchery:
dukeofdebauchery Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
It amazes me how much truth is behind this. Such simplicity yet such depth. Love it <3
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:iconlocomore:
locomore Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its... beautiful <3
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:iconpastel-dragons:
Pastel-Dragons Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
I feel the same way, your not alone
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:iconda-awesome-girl:
Da-AWESOME-girl Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful... You did AWESOME. :)
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IrkenPony Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep. Nailed it.
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Tinetheeviltwin Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There is not much to say... you have said it all...
There is always one more lie...
i have never been cutting myself.. but my best friend does... so i know the excuses... she never lies to me about it... but if anyone else ask her... that is pretty much what she says...  
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Tinetheeviltwin Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There is not much to say... you have said it all...
There is always one more lie...
i have never been cutting myself.. but my best friend does... so i know the excuses... she never lies to me about it... but if anyone else ask her... that is pretty much what she says...  
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Eyes-On-Fire1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
So emotional. I know this all too well. Thank you for posting this. It is great <3
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Paylee Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
i really love this so much! I know how this feels. I'm addicted to reading it. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I know that feeling... It goes on until we fall from the abyss...
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:iconlimeheer:
limeheer Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
to many people know this feeling to well
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izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured here: theblackbladeheros.tumblr.com
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Julchen-san Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Thabks for telling me and for the credits!
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izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem! Of course I would give you the credit, not only does it help my blog, it also help you! ^_\\\
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Lady-Brazil Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, this was beautifully written~

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:iconjj-jam:
JJ-Jam Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it so much. You are an amazing writer.
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Julchen-san Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconjj-jam:
JJ-Jam Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No prob. I tell the truth.
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KenotheWolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
versteh ich nicht ,^,
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:iconjulchen-san:
Julchen-san Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Daww ;-; warum nicht?
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:iconkenothewolf:
KenotheWolf Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
KA
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:iconjulchen-san:
Julchen-san Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Lol
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xMechaChaos Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
This is amazing. :heart:
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TheFrigidFanatic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Very true
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xX-Und3ad-Solid3r-xX Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist
That...used to be me
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CrystalChell Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it :heart: it's very emotional
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:iconizzyizz303:
izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
.................This describes my life...........
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SyrinaKorramaya Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel you, bro.
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izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
.....You realize I'm a girl right? and phdicbasdvcsdf
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:iconsyrinakorramaya:
SyrinaKorramaya Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. I am one too. Girls can also be bros.
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